Partners In Crime: Kyle & Carmens Story. Part 1. Author: Hcarver52. Hello all, this is my first story ever. Mind the unedited grammar. Complete fiction. This starts slow as it is the first chapter. The main characters are in an obvious age range, however it never specifies them. you decide how old you prefer them to be. I tried to write a realistic story, not one that could only happen in a bad porno. Would love criticism. Thanks!
Partners In Crime: Kyle & Carmens Story. Part 1
Author: Hcarver52
My muscles ached horribly. My heart was beating insanely fast. sweat dripped down my forehead. Adrenaline oozed out of my every poore. I wasn’t about to bother wiping it away though. My task at hand was far more important requiring all my concentration. and i was about come to the climax of this task. i felt as though battery acid pumped through my legs. my arms crossed infront of my chest, my hands trembling. i clenched both my fists pulled them in and crouched down that last 2 inches. Then in an explosive instant I jumped straight up into the air kicked and let a battle cry. my form was perfect, stances low, power at max and now i had the focus for my form that without a doubt would earn me first place at my martial arts tournament that was coming up very soon.
My name is Kyle I am a high school student I live in southern california. I really shouldn’t give any more details seeing the nature of my story. I’m pretty athletic, fairly tall, pretty cut abs. Defined chest. Goes along with martial art training. I thought Myself to be decent looking. I come from a pretty well off family. My parents are still together.
My dad is a shipping coordinator for a chemical company and my mom is in the sales department at the same company. I have a younger sister Carol, who besides being an attention seeking nosey 7th grader is not the worst person in the world. I also have a cousin Carmen who stays with us a lot. Carmens parents are developers in that same company my parents work for. They sometimes accept temporary out of country positions. the pay is great but they end up being away for 3 to 6 months at a time. Which is why Carmen stays / lives with us so much. Her parrents have set up transportation for her to be taken to and from our home to the next town over where her home and school district were. She just came too stay with us again this time 2 days ago.
Martial arts is my passion, always has been since i was a kid. I just earned my black belt and was about to compete on the blackbelt level in this tournament. Just a little intimadating. I was in my backyard practicing my form. it was getting late. 10:30. I had gotten a solid 2 hours of training in. I was done for the evening. It was time for a good wind down.
It was a Friday night and my parrents were at their friends house for their weekly adaults time card game (excuse for drinking). My parents like to pretend or portray they are responsible people who don’t drink too much or party down. But I’ve seen them on some of the nights after they hang out with their friends. However they expect my sister and I and Carmen too for that matter to be angels and avoid trouble completly. They lay the hammer down hard when we get in the smallest amount of trouble. Grounding, the occasional belt maybe. you get the idea. So growing up in these circumstances you either never break any rules or you learn to not get caught.
Like I said previously I needed a good wind down. And being a young californian I enjoyed smoking pot. I wasn’t a complete stoner with hemp hats and dred locks and and all that hippie shit. Hell, no one would probably asusume that i did smoke just by looking at me. I jumped the fence into my neighbors back yard and retrieved my stash from under a rock next to their pond. I was about to jump over the wall and head up the mountain behind our street when I over heard Carmen scream, “Are you fucking kidding me!?!? Lauren’s going to prom with Mike now?!?! What a fucking slut!!! I swear that asshole needs to be castrated!!!” She was in her bedroom / guest room with the window open. she must have been on the phone.
I assumed she was talking about her ex Mike. I had never asked her too much about what had happened between them but I know he had been cheating on her. I hesitated for a minute debating whether to mind my own business, go up the mountain and get high or if I should go and try to talk to Carmen. She was not usually the type to be overly dramatic and I truly did care. So my conscience won the debate and I went to talk to her. I aproached her window and tapped a few times.
She looked up at me startled. She ended her phone call and apolagised. “Sorry I didnt mean to scream and make a scene, Mike is literally trying to get me to kill him.” I didn’t want to pry and be nosey but i was concerned for her. “You want to talk about it?” I asked. He is just an asshole”, she replied with a sigh. “I heard you say you were gonna castrate him? that must be something pretty serious, remind me never to piss you off.” I joked with her trying to ease the tension i could feel coming from her. “It’s not something i really wonna talk about.” She said. “I figured as much,” I replied to her “Sorry, I’m not trying to pry or be nosey.” “I’m know,” she said “sorry, I’m not trying to be a bitch. I know you’re just being nice.” She looked up at me with tears forming and forced a smile.
Her forced smile threw me off for a second. One thing I have yet to mention is that Carmen is a fox. (I know right, not usually something you refer to your cousin as.) She is very pretty and has an angelic smile. We were always pretty close growing up. With our parents working for the same company we practicly grew up being baby sat at each others houses.
We never really had a falling out so to sayy but we did kind of do our own thing and go different ways there for a year or so. I guess I attributed it to age and her getting popular and all of her friends. I was glad that she was living with us now though. Kind of like having an old buddy come around again. But I could see a difference in her in the past few days. And I’m guessing now it was Mike that was the cause of her having to force a smile. It wasn’t her genuine real smile that I knew.
I know something that may make you feel a little better, I said as I held up the blunt that I gotten out of my stash. (My stash That i kept hidden next to my neighbors pond) She laughed and replied ,”You didn’t learn your lesson the last time you got busted smoking pot did you? You just can’t help but find ways to get into trouble.”
What can I say, I like smoking pot. I replied, “It keeps me sane and helps me tolerate people. Besides you can only get in trouble if you get caught.”
How did you get caught last time? she asked. “That asshole next door smelled it when i was out here smoking and called the fucking cops. I said pointing at my neighbors house. “Thats why i hide my stash in his backyard. He gets the blame if someone finds it.” she broke out laughing, “That is hilarious!! Oh my god you are too much!”
She was genuinely smiling now. Still a hint of tears in her eyes but she was atleast laughing and happy, atleast for the moment. “Come on” I said “Lets go destress, don’t tell me you turned into a goody good and your too cool to get high with your cousin.” “Alright you talked me into it” she said, “But just because you peer pressured me into it. What about your parents? Won’t they be back soon? And What if that old guy next door smells it again? I don’t think I could handle dealing with the cops being stoned, let alone your parents.”
“Ye of little faith, i laughed, “I hike half way up the back side of the mountain up to where that little lake is, besides my parents wont be home for at least an hour. plenty of time to lose the smell.” I winked at her and gestured for her to follow me. She laughed and jumped up off her bed and walked over to the window. “I do have to hand it to ya” she said, “you are resourceful.” She slid the window open a little and jumped up and sat on the window sill and swiviled her legs out. “i don’t want Carol to see me leave the room” she said, “she follows me like a lost puppy.”
I tried to avert my eyes and not make it obvious that I had been discretly checking out her ass as she climbed out the window. You see like i said Carmen was indeed a fox. Her ass is a little big on her small frame but far from a ghetto booty. Her boobs fit her the same. I’d say C cups maybe, (I’m not exactly and expert on bra size) Shoulder length golden brown hair, bright blue eyes and she stood about 5 foot 2″. I couldn’t believe Mike had let her get away. She’s definitely a catch.
We jumped the rock wall / fence in my back yard and proceeded to head up the mountain in silence. I was trying to come up with something to say to her when she broke the silence. “So talk to me” she said, “Tell me about what you’ve been up to, I’ve missed having you around all the time.” as she playfully punched me in the arm. “Tell me about ur girlfriends and all that juicy stuff.” She said as we came up on a boulder to sit on and enjoy the view of the illuminated streets.
What a bad topic for her to bring up. I had just been dumped and humiliated a few months ago. “You would have to go there wouldn’t you?” I said as lit the blunt and took a good long drag off it. feeling the smoke roll down into my lungs. I stopped to reflect on the painful memory for a moment and i passed her the blunt. She interrupted my daze when she passed it back to me and said,”Oh come on it cant be that bad? did your asshole of an Ex cheat on you with your best friend and then hook up and invite her to go to prom I was soposed to go to?”
No i replied, “That does sound pretty bad though, is that what happened with Mike?” “More or less” she replied smugly.
We had been passing the blunt back and forth a few times by this time and I could feel it kicking in. “She told me the whole It’s not you its me bullshit. And she told her big mouth friend I wasn’t doing it for her in bed. which got around the school. So thats where I’m at with all the girls in my high school.”
Eric Larder says
Great story. Keep it up. I hope you finish the story.