This is my first attempt at submitting a story… I would welcome and enjoy all feedback… Thanks.*Ab kya kahoon. Meri umar 21 saal hai, mere ghar mein mere saath char aur log rehtein hain. Ek mera bhai Satish jo 20 saal ka hai, meri bahen, Pooja, jo 19 saal ki hai, mera baap, Akash, 45