“Lady Amia!” One of them shouted, running up to her. “I was wondering if it would be possible to arrange a meeting with God to discuss the possibility of having my home planet moved to prevent it being incorporated into-”
“I’ll make a note of it,” Amia said, interrupting him. “But God has an extremely busy schedule, so don’t expect an appointment for a long time.”
“Thank you Lady Amia,” The angel said, before bowing and leaving her.
Amia returned to her home, a large mansion which would have put all Earthly homes to shame.
“Welcome home Lady Amia,” said one of her angelic servants as she arrived. “Would you like me to get you anything?”
“Have a bath prepared,” Amia replied. “Is Achré home yet?”
“Yes my Lady, I believe he is in his study.”
“Good,” Amia smiled.
As David walked through the gate to Heaven, he was bathed in a glorious white light, which felt absolutely wonderful. When it cleared, David saw that he was in a beautiful field. He was completely naked, but he did not feel ashamed. He looked down at his body, realised that he was young. He had the body of his teenage self again.
“Hello there, David.” David turned to see two beautiful, naked girls, sat on a tree stump, staring at him. Their bodies were perfect, exactly as he would have liked them. His cock went instantly hard at the sight.
“What is this?” He asked them.
“We’re your reward,” One of the girls said seductively. “Well, part of it. You can enjoy us for as long as you want, and then go off to enjoy something else.”
The two girls then got up, walked over to him, and began kissing and cuddling him, fondling every bit of flesh they could.
“But I’m married,” David protested, moaning as they pleasured him.
“David, this is Heaven,” the second girl moaned. “There are no rules here. Everything you desire will be yours.” In order to demonstrate this, the second girl moved her kissing further down his body, before reaching his swollen cock, and sliding her mouth over it.
“Oh God…” David moaned, making-out with the first girl while the second sucked him. “This is incredible…”
“And it’s never going to end,” The first girl moaned into his mouth.
David came quickly, in what was the most powerful orgasm he’d ever experienced. To his surprise, his cock didn’t soften afterwards, and he still felt ready for more, which the girls gave to him. The two girls swapped roles occasionally, but he never went more than a second or so without a mouth on his cock. Every orgasm he had was longer and more pleasurable than the last, giving him more pleasure with each shot of cum than the total sum of every orgasm he’d ever experienced on Earth.
The girls sucked David to dozens of orgasms, more than he bothered to count, before they laid him down on the grass, which felt softer and more comfortable than anything he’d ever laid on.
“Why did you stop?” David asked.
“Why, so we could fuck you of course,” the second girl giggled, before kissing him. The first girl then climbed on top of him, and started riding his cock. This felt even more incredible than the blowjobs had, the girl’s pussy feeling as though it had been crafted specifically for his penis, as it caressed every single nook and cranny on it. He could definitely get used to this, he decided.
Amia was woken up the next morning by the feeling of her husband Achré moving out from their tight embrace, which involved having their wings wrapped around one-another. Amia instinctively started to get up too, before Achré stopped her.
“And where do you think you’re going?” He asked her.
“I’m getting up for work?” She replied.
“Oh no you’re not. God gave you the day off, so you’re taking the day off.”
“Achré, I’ve got so much to catch up on, I can’t afford to take a day off.”
“Amia, babe, you’re overworked,” Achré said, before kissing her. “Get some rest. You deserve it.”
“Oh fine, if you insist,” Amia relented. “But I’m blaming you if the universe explodes while I’m laid here.”
“I’m sure the universe will be fine. Now I’m gonna go shower and head to work. Those sinners won’t torture themselves.”
“Fine, I’m just going to lay here and try to go back to sleep, despite every fibre of my being telling me it’s time to get up for work.”
“You do that. Love you.”
“Love you too.”
Achré was the archangel in charge of Hell. His job involved making sure that everything in Hell went to plan, with everyone receiving the punishment they deserved. He loved his job, probably more so than Amia loved hers, but even he wasn’t this reluctant to take a day off.
After Achré had left for work, Amia laid there trying to go back to sleep, but she just couldn’t manage it. Eventually she just decided to give up. She got out of bed, put on her angelic robes, and went to her study to work on the list of candidates that God had requested. This was always a long an arduous process, sorting through quintillions upon quintillions of candidates to find a list of people she believed would be suited to become the next God. There had been enough bad ones in the past that Amia was keen to ensure this new one was good.
When David had finished fucking the girls, which took a very long time to happen, the 3 of them laid cuddling on the grass, the girls kissing and fondling him while he just laid there, happier than he’d ever been in his life. To his disappointment, one of the girls moved off of him.
“I have to go now sweetie, but my friend here’s gonna take care of you,” she said. She gave him another passionate kiss, before she left.
“Where’s she going?” David asked the remaining girl.
“Lady Dorothea has summoned her, and you don’t ignore a summons from Lady Dorothea,” the girl replied.
“Who’s Lady Dorothea?”
“The archangel Dorothea is in charge of Heaven. It’s her job to make sure that everyone’s eternal reward is as blissful as possible.”
“Can I meet her?”
“I’m sorry, but Lady Dorothea is a very busy woman.”
“But you said I could do anything here.”
“Almost anything. Now then, would you like me to show you around Heaven?”
“I guess so, Miss…”
“Luna. There’s no need for the “Miss”. Particularly as I’m married.”
“Married!?” David exclaimed.
“Don’t worry, my husband has no problem with my job. In fact, he does the same job.”
“I’m more surprised by the fact that you have a husband. You don’t look much older than my kids.”
“Well, I think you and I would both prefer this to if I actually looked my age.”
“How old are you? If you don’t mind me asking.”
“Well, by the years you use on your home planet, I’m…17 quintillion, 234 quadrillion, 34 trillion, 789 billion, 544 million, 128 thousand, 619 years old.”
David was shocked.
“No really, how old are you?”
“I cannot lie to you, David. That is my age.”
“But that’s impossible. Nothing’s that old. The universe isn’t even that old.”
“And your point is? This current universe came into existence 14.6 billion years ago, but who said it’s the first? Or even the millionth?”
“This is all so weird…”
“Passing into the afterlife is a strange process. That is why I am here. To greet you, and ease your entrance.”
“So what now?”
“Well, that tour of Heaven is still available, if you want it.”
“That would be good, thanks.”
“Lord…” One of the angel girls in his hot tub whispered in his ear seductively. “What would you like us to do to you?”
“Just keep cuddling me,” God replied. The girls looked surprised.
“Are you sure Lord?” The second girl asked. “Would you not prefer some…”other” form of comfort?”
“You girls know I love your “comfort”, but right now, I’m just not in the mood,” God sighed.
“Have you displeased you, Lord?” The first girl asked.
“No no, quite the opposite,” God replied. “It’s just…girls, this is all becoming too much for me. Funny, when I took this job, I couldn’t understand why anyone would ever want to give it up. Now I can definitely see it.”
“Well we will support you in whatever decision you make Lord.”
“I know you will, and that’s why I like you both.”
David held Luna’s hand as she guided him through the plains of Heaven. As he looked around him, the landscape was the most beautiful he had seen in his entire life. Everything was infinitely more beautiful than anything on Earth. He could see many people, all naked. Many of them were having sex, some were playing games, and some were just lounging around, enjoying their eternal reward. All of them, David noticed, looked extremely happy.
“This place is wonderful,” David said.
“That’s the idea,” Luna smiled. “There is no sin here. Nothing is taboo. If you desire it, you shall have it. Heaven is of course infinite, places being created as the blessed wish for them, but many people choose to spend time here in the plains, and enjoy one-another’s company.”
“What’s that big building in the distance?”
“Oh, that is God’s Holy Palace, where the Lord resides in his reign over all of creation. That is one of the few places where you are not permitted to go. Even we angels cannot enter without the Lord’s permission.”
“It’s fine, I’m sure I’ll be quite happy here,” David smiled.
“Oh you will, I promise. Incidentally, should you wish to tell a superior angel that I have done a particularly good job at making your eternal reward as rewarding as possible, it would be appreciated.”
“Trying to score points with the boss?”
“I’m trying to get a promotion. I like my job, but I’ve been in this position for more than 600 trillion years now. I’d like to move up a bit.”
“You’re really that old?”
“Well no, I’m 17 quintillion, 234 quadrillion, 34 trillion, 789 billion, 544 million, 128 thousand, 619 years old, like I said before. It’s really not as old as you think. I may look like a teenager, but to be honest, that’s basically how old I am by angel standards. Eri, the girl who greeted you with me, is much older than I am.”
“Are all angels that old?”
“Well no, because that’s not how maths works. You see, angels all start off as mortals. We are chosen by God to ascend to the ranks of the heavenly hosts. Except for Lady Amia. She is the only “pure” angel, who has never been a mortal.”
“Who’s Lady Amia?”
“The woman you saw helping God to judge you. She is God’s chief archangel and personal assistant. It is her job to guide God in the running of the universe.”
RANDY says
I REFUSE TO READ AN UNFINISHED STORY AGAIN!!!!! ANOTHER UNFINISHED STORY! I WENT TO THE ENDING CHAPTER AND THE AUTHOR CLAIMS HE’S GONG TO FINISH THE STORY BUT THAT WAS IN THE FALL OF 2015. ALMOST FEBRUARY 2017. SO FUCK YOU AUTHOR FOR NOT FINISHING YOUR STORY.
SO FAR I’VE READ 5 OR 6 UNFINISHED STORIES AT THIS SIGHT. THEY WERE REAL GOOD STORIES AND I FELT SO TOTALLY CHEATED, I’M NOT DOING IT AGAIN! READ IT IF YOU MUST BUT I WOULDN’T IF I WERE YOU!